Excellent Plot Dragged Down by Repetitive Dialog
The plot and storyline are excellent, but the book is a redundant read due to the dialog. The back-and-forth between the two main characters—both on the spectrum—becomes endless and repetitive.
Charlotte is invisible to everyone until they need help and hates crowds, while the Duke hides away to avoid small talk. Their meeting in a hidden room leads to Charlotte solving a complex ledger fraud that the Duke’s own accountants couldn’t figure out. It’s great seeing two wallflowers find love, but if the Duke wanted her, he shouldn't have had to play the games this story puts them through. Both characters take time to realize their feelings, but letting outside influences dictate their relationship comes at an unreasonable cost for people who supposedly love each other.
Great storyline, but the repetitive dialogue really holds it back.






