Frontier Romp That Overstays Its Welcome
Rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️
I take no pleasure in admitting this—as a well-documented devotee of a lively Regency romp—but transplanting the genre to the Western frontier simply does not work.
The story glibly glosses over serious historical realities, including the displacement of the Cherokee, through a heroine whose sole personality trait is chasing Elijah. She remains bafflingly oblivious to McAllister, a man who courts her one minute and wreaks havoc the next.
While the narrative opens with promise, the pacing quickly unravels. The timeline jolts wildly—snapping forward before grinding to a halt—leaving me astonished to learn two months had passed when it felt like three weeks. Worse, the delightful happily ever after refuses to know when to take its leave. Once the villain is arrested and the baby is delivered, the tension evaporates completely, leaving six agonizing chapters of post-climax drift.
Abby and Elijah may have found their happily-ever-after, but six chapters of victory laps is a trial for the rest of us. Sometimes, less is decidedly more.
Rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️
I take no pleasure in admitting this—as a well-documented devotee of a lively Regency romp—but transplanting the genre to the Western frontier simply does not work.
The story glibly glosses over serious historical realities, including the displacement of the Cherokee, through a heroine whose sole personality trait is chasing Elijah. She remains bafflingly oblivious to McAllister, a man who courts her one minute and wreaks havoc the next.
While the narrative opens with promise, the pacing quickly unravels. The timeline jolts wildly—snapping forward before grinding to a halt—leaving me astonished to learn two months had passed when it felt like three weeks. Worse, the delightful happily ever after refuses to know when to take its leave. Once the villain is arrested and the baby is delivered, the tension evaporates completely, leaving six agonizing chapters of post-climax drift.
Abby and Elijah may have found their happily-ever-after, but six chapters of victory laps is a trial for the rest of us. Sometimes, less is decidedly more.






