The story is well-written and the plot carries the story. The vow is extraneous to the story although it is clearly about the vow. The vow is why he married her, not how he came to love her. The problem in this story is not the vow itself, but should have been him actually trying to court her or finding her someone who would care for her and keep her safe, then forcing a marriage that clearly is going to make her unhappy. It has a happy ending, but the whole story is rather sad.
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