This is an interesting story and the plot line was an excellent idea. Unfortunately, the story failed in a few areas. The man is scarred enough the ladies in town don't want him, and he orders a mail order bride that happens to be partially blind. She can see shadow and light and make out some shapes. Rose tries to prove her worth on the ranch, but Mark is impatient with her. What he fails to see is that Rose wants to be his wife and is doing everything to try and be his wife, even with her disability. It's greatest failure is the relationship between Mark and Rose. Mark never showed enough interest in her to actually fall in love with her. Two, he was disappointed in finding out she was blind and should have been overjoyed that she would never really see his disfigurement. She wouldn't care about that as long as she felt loved and cared for. This is another area the story failed. I had great expectations for this story because it addresses an issue of blindness and didn't really follow through.
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