This story had real promise but failed in the many sex scenes and the whiplash climax. The characters don’t stay true to their character and Uncle Broderick is a 2 bit character that gets a starring role. The author failed when introducing him how important he was to the family. This story has real potential to be a five star book, but failed with the whiplash and poor carry through.
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