A Betrothed for the Guarded Duke by Dorothy Sheldon

 

Rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Hiding in Plain Sight from a Guard-Dog Duchess
The "guarded Duke" of this title refers less to a brooding hero and far more to his formidable mother, the Dowager Duchess, who guards the front door and scrutinizes every piece of post that crosses the threshold. To circumvent this fortress, Cordelia slips through the back door, securing a position as governess to the Duke’s niece, Marina. Cordelia’s true mission is to confront the Duke, Theo, with a long-forgotten marriage contract and the childhood ring he gave her a decade ago. Unfortunately, due to a harrowing experience with cannon fire in Belgium, Theo doesn't recognize her at all.
Our heroine desperately needs him to acknowledge his duty, but she is trapped between the heartache of his amnesia and the terrifying vigilance of his mother. So, she remains under his roof, hiding in plain sight. The story is beautifully penned, and the characters are thoroughly engaging, though the narrative loses its footing slightly in the middle. Cordelia shifts from harmlessly omitting the truth to actively lying to Theo, which tarnishes her charm. It takes a perfect storm—her own deception, the Dowager dismissing her under the guise of a "better opportunity," and a menacing letter from her uncle—to finally force her hand.
The ultimate flaw lies in the heroine's final execution. While Cordelia thoroughly understands this new, fractured version of Theo, she ultimately makes a monumental decision for him instead of allowing him the space to piece together the dark rooms of his own memory. This sudden recklessness feels entirely detrimental to her original cause. It is a thoroughly good read, but it is always deeply frustrating when a character's established traits are broken just to force a climax.