This story took me a long time to get through. These two were at each other's throat from the moment she stepped off the train. It seemed to me that took an especially long time to see the spark between themselves. She recognize the spark, but was not going to let Jon bully her. Jon had no idea how to behave around a woman. The last thing you should do is demand. I think if he had more helpful and seen to some type of security for her, than trying to bully her; he would have gotten a whole lot farther, a whole sooner. The characters in this story have two modes: polite & yelling. It seems to me that Annie thought moving away from Philadelphia was a way for her to escape her routine life & dragging her sister away from some barman who save her sister.
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